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Pulse 193 by lightfootcomics Pulse 193 by lightfootcomics
I'm not totally sure I'm happy with the lettering in the first panel.  Maybe I should have re-rewritten it so that Lucy was speaking first.

I'm not sure at what point I decided to have Annie speak first but be on the right side.
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khamya9 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
I think it works better with Annie speaking first. If Lucy speaks both first and last the page feels oppressively preachy. Alternating like this it's a conversation.
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Thecheshirebat Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You could have Lucy speak first with a bubble at the top, then Annie's bubble under it. It works but you lose some of your background. Just a thought.
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