This was all in my original plans, but as it continues, I worry that it isn't making any sense. Also Grace will be introduced on either page 159 or 160, depending on if I add another page to this chapter.
Am I mistaken or have Annies' breast gotten bigger since she gained her powers? Reason I ask is because I remembered that they reached as far as her belly button but this page makes it seem like the go past that. Am I imagining things?
Hmmm... Looking at page 101 it seems I was mistaken and they do go a bit past. Just wanted to be sure fir the upcoming Christmas fan art.
Glad to see Lucy showing some confidence and coming out of her shell some. Especially in that last panel
It might be that for a while I've been trying to make them look more natural. A common complaint early in this Pulse was that her chest was too spherical. It might just be that they aren't bigger, but just are lower.
fun page. Having helped a busty girlfriend try to find properly fitting clothes I empathize with this one. Especially panel #3. "I can safety pin it" "No you really can't" "Sure I can, see" RRRIIP. "ok, I can sew it closed".
well, this satisfies the 'comedic interlude' as well as certain fan service qualifications- atleast this part I can say makes sense (hey, how many superhero stories do you know of refrain from comedic interludes? only the 'hard boiled' type that I can think of) I would say I've found on a few occasions that the page-a-week status occasionally throws the reader when looking only at the new page versus reading a chapter in sequence-this is expecially the case when you change a location/time frame...but it easy to fix just by going through previous updates