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Pulse 143 by lightfootcomics Pulse 143 by lightfootcomics
Not sure what I think of this page, it's good or flawed. But I'm out of time and just have to post it.
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not sure exactly what I'm seeing in the large panel... ^^;
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Yeah, after the many comments I should replace the figure to the right.  It's the brunette removing her shirt with her back towards the redhead.  You're seeing her back and the curve of her right breast.  ...although it wasn't as clever a shot as I thought, and it's too zoomed in.
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ToddNTheShiningSword Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh. I guess if it'd been done in a style you haven't been using for your Pulse comics all these years (MAN, how many years has it been? I swear I started seeing Pulse in purple spandex and cyborg armor in, like, 2006!) then maybe ribcage or some other anatomy would show that would've made that clearer :shrug: Now that you've said that, I went and saw the other comments of confusion... ^^;
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rtpoe Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
Love the sound effects! :)
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whoyou Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
I'm definitely down for more sexy roommate hi-jinks :D 
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013   Digital Artist
I don't think they're tall enough for hi-jinks.  Low-jinks is the best they can do.
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MasterToymaker Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Artist
I got what was happening right away, but I'm not sure why it's happening- did Annie think that she'd just strip behind her while she's standing in front of a mirror?

Annie's chest looks smaller in the last panel than she did on the previous page, as well as the third panel, but that could also be the hand size that others have mentioned.
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Digital Artist
I figured roommates, especially female roommates who have known each other since grade school, might not have any barriers.  That it usually wouldn't be a big deal for one to take a shower while the other one was using the bathroom.  ...I mean imagine what has happened with Lucy over the years.  You could expect times where she needed some help, or where Annie hurt herself maybe.  They are also probably used to being examined because of their powers.  Annie was thrown out of her normal routine when she noticed that Lucy had stopped and was staring at her.  She was instead used to Lucy just going about her business.

Yeah, Annie is too small here.  Whenever she's been out of the comic for a while I always under-expect her size.  When she's drawn correctly, it looks like it's too much.  I must have accidentally followed my natural instinct.  The correct way is to start to drawn her like this and then notice that she's too small and make her larger.
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MasterToymaker Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Artist
That makes sense; I hadn't looked at it that way. Maybe Annie's embarrassment/modesty threw me or something.
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013   Digital Artist
Maybe I should have had the same thing happen in a flashback first.
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MasterToymaker Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Professional Artist
Maybe... The staging seems odd for Annie to be disrobing too.

Maybe if the establishing panels weren't just Lucy's head, but something to make it more obvious that they were both in the bathroom in various stages of undress together and the thing that strikes her as odd is Annie's bust, not her pending nudity- as it is, she kind of freaks out when all there might be to see (from her angle) is some back cleavage.
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013   Digital Artist
I could try to add a new first panel by narrowing both of the upper panels, or even replace those panels.
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JellyLord Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
o.0
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darrellsan Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I'm not sure what's going on in panel three.
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Digital Artist
Annie is lifting up her shirt.  It was risky to go with a few simple lines, and it didn't work out.
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Chwen-Hoou Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Nicely done.
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jhwood9 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Traditional Artist
Panel 2 needs some work... can't tell what i'm looking at.  Perhaps more of a bosom-shaped profile, with enough of the torso to indicate size...?
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Digital Artist
Yeah, I think it's cropped too much.  I need to show more of her... without showing too much.  I think I need to keep Lucy and the background and just start over with Annie.
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jhwood9 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013   Traditional Artist
I meant to say panel 3, not panel 2, but it appears you understood my point regardless.
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Haha, well that's the panel everyone else seemed to be confused about.  And the first two panels could easily be accidentally considered one panel.
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Greelox Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
I would stare too. ;)

Love the title, btw.
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Ookamicirekun Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I agree. Hand size is smaller than the rest of her body and I think her right shoulder should also be shown slightly, since her arm would be raised at that point. I love how shocked and embarrassed Annie is and how Lucy has her hand on her chest like she's checking to make sure they've not gotten bigger XD
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lightfootcomics Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Digital Artist
I think the problem is that I should be showing more of her body, and it looks strange cropped so much.  If the hand or whatever is too big or not, it's hard to tell with so little of her showing.
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TheArtificer Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
It's not bad.
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Aonar Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the middle panel looks a bit off for the hand size compared to the rest of the body but the rest looks good to me.
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TheFwank Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
I think it does what it's trying to do well enough. 
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khamya9 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Agreed, it's a very human page and that's all it needs to be.
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