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I'll move this to scraps later, but I suspect that a lot of people only view other artists main art, and not their scraps.
A number of older pages have things that I didn't like about them, and wanted to go back and fix. This was one of the most obvious. In panel five it wasn't obvious why she was surprised. Although I ran amok and changed some other things too (although like any page I probably could have changed a lot more). I think panel three is exactly the same, or it should be, there were minor things changed about panels one and two. A ton was changed in panel four, five was redrawn, and six I just made a few alterations.
Any thoughts? Better? Do you prefer the old page, or something about it? Did I make some mistake? I do often make minor changes to pages, but I thought I should do this with any major changes. At least I notice that the Annie in panel four is a more modern version, less big round headed, I don't know if that makes this a mistake.
A number of older pages have things that I didn't like about them, and wanted to go back and fix. This was one of the most obvious. In panel five it wasn't obvious why she was surprised. Although I ran amok and changed some other things too (although like any page I probably could have changed a lot more). I think panel three is exactly the same, or it should be, there were minor things changed about panels one and two. A ton was changed in panel four, five was redrawn, and six I just made a few alterations.
Any thoughts? Better? Do you prefer the old page, or something about it? Did I make some mistake? I do often make minor changes to pages, but I thought I should do this with any major changes. At least I notice that the Annie in panel four is a more modern version, less big round headed, I don't know if that makes this a mistake.
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After a bit of analysis I still consider the older page flows better in my mind.
This is subtle but it feels that the "camera" does not jump around as much.
The older page just has a more expected transition through panels 4,5 & 6.
The rework of some lines, face shape, etc. did make the new page cleaner.
Do not know if the figure change in panel 6 went to far whereas the older was too little.
Would love to see other side-by-side page reworks.
This is subtle but it feels that the "camera" does not jump around as much.
The older page just has a more expected transition through panels 4,5 & 6.
The rework of some lines, face shape, etc. did make the new page cleaner.
Do not know if the figure change in panel 6 went to far whereas the older was too little.
Would love to see other side-by-side page reworks.